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PE 1408 · fol. 6

Topic Sentences

A topic sentence states the single claim a paragraph will support, so a reader knows its point before reading the details. · 12 min

A reader should never have to finish your paragraph to learn what it was about. A topic sentence prevents that. It is the sentence — usually the first — that states the one claim the paragraph will support. Everything after it earns that claim. When the topic sentence is clear, the reader knows the point before the details arrive and reads those details as proof, not as a puzzle. And a topic sentence makes a claim; it does not merely announce a subject. This paragraph is about homework names a topic. Homework in the early grades does more harm than good makes a claim the paragraph can defend.

Guess before you learn

Which of these is a real topic sentence — one that states a claim the rest of the paragraph can support?

THE DEPTH DIAL — the same idea, younger or deeper
9–12

9–12

A topic sentence is the paragraph's controlling claim, stated so the reader grasps the point before the evidence arrives. It does two things at once: it asserts something arguable, and it previews what the rest of the paragraph must deliver. That second function makes it a promise — every sentence below it should visibly pay off the claim. Weak topic sentences announce a subject ('Now I will discuss taxes') or state a bare fact ('Taxes fund public services'). Neither gives the paragraph a claim to prove. Strong ones commit: 'The current tax code quietly favors the wealthy.' Now the paragraph owes the reader that case.

topic sentence

The sentence that states a paragraph's single claim — usually first — so the reader knows the point before the support. A claim, not an announcement of the subject.

Topic sentence — the claimSupport: a reasonSupport: evidenceSupport: an example
PLATE I The topic sentence governs the paragraph: every sentence below pays off the claim above.

Ink That Thinks — guess first; the answer draws itself.
These sentences form one paragraph, scrambled. Put the topic sentence first, then the support that pays it off.

  1. Public libraries are among the best money a town spends.
  2. For the price of a few streetlights, a library serves readers of every age all year.
  3. It offers internet and job-search help to people who have nowhere else to find it.
  4. And unlike most public services, it charges nothing at the door.
Reorder, then commit.
PLATE II Claim first, then three supports that pay it off. Guess the order in graphite; the ink shows it.
Why is this true?

Why put the claim first, instead of building up to it?

Because a reader who knows the claim can judge every following sentence as support. Without it, the reader holds the details in suspense, guessing where the paragraph is headed. Fronting the claim turns reading from guesswork into checking — far less work, and far more persuasive.

Retrieval Gate — answer before you continue 0 / 4

1.Which sentence is a topic sentence — a claim a paragraph can support?

2.Why does a bare fact like 'The town has a recycling program' fail as a topic sentence?

3.Order these scrambled sentences so the claim comes first and its two supports follow.

  1. Kids who play are exhausted for the next school day.
  2. Kids who watch lose an evening of homework and sleep.
  3. Late-night games cost more students than they entertain.

4.Turn this announcement into a topic sentence that makes a claim: 'This paragraph is about school uniforms.'

To write a topic sentence, name your subject, then say the one thing you will argue about it. Start with the subject — school start times — and finish the thought: school start times should move later. If your sentence could be met with 'so what?' and have no answer, it is still an announcement. Cut openers like In this paragraph and I will discuss; they delay the claim and add nothing. One more test: read only your topic sentences, in order. If they tell the argument by themselves, your paragraphs are pulling their weight.

Turn a topic into a topic sentence — the steps fade as you master them

1
Start with the subject: 'homework in early grades.' Does a subject alone make a claim? Type yes or no.
Subject: homework in early grades
2
Add a position. Which is a claim, not an announcement? Type A or B. A: 'This paragraph discusses early homework.' B: 'Early homework does more harm than good.'
Choose the claim
3
Cut the throat-clearing. Should you keep the opener 'In this paragraph, I will argue that…'? Type yes or no.
In this paragraph, I will argue that early homework does more harm than good.
NOT A TOPIC SENTENCEWHY IT FAILSA TOPIC SENTENCE'This paragraph is about zoos.'Names a subject, makes no claim'Modern zoos do more for conservation than for entertainment.''Zoos have existed for centuries.'A bare fact — nothing to argue'Zoos should be judged by their conservation work, not their crowds.''I will now discuss zoos.'Announces intention, delays the point'The best zoos are quietly becoming wildlife hospitals.'
PLATE III Three announcements, and the claims that should replace them.
Retrieval Gate — answer before you continue 0 / 3

1.A paragraph's details are all about lower prices, coupons, and savings. Which topic sentence best fits it?

2.Match each set of paragraph details to the topic sentence it supports.

Details about lower crime and more foot traffic
Details about calories and vending machines
Details about ticket prices and travel time

3.Write a topic sentence for a paragraph that will argue recess should be longer.

A page of clear topic sentences is a skeleton of your argument. But paragraphs still have to connect. When a reader finishes one paragraph and starts the next, they need to know the relation between them — does this new point add to the last, contradict it, or follow from it? Naming that relation is the work of transitions, and it is the next folio. Get topic sentences and transitions working together, and a reader can follow a long argument without ever losing the thread.

Practice — new ink and old, interleaved

1.A paragraph argues that a town should plant more trees, then its fourth sentence praises the mayor's new bike lanes. What has gone wrong?

2.Order these scrambled sentences into one unified paragraph: claim, reason, then consequence.

  1. It needs no equipment, no gym, and no special clothes.
  2. A short daily walk is the most reliable exercise most people will actually keep.
  3. And because it is easy, people skip it far less than they skip harder plans.

3.Turn this announcement into a topic sentence that makes a claim: 'Here I will discuss homework.'

4.Why can't you write a strong essay 'about' a whole topic like music? Answer in one sentence.

5.Order these scrambled sentences into one unified paragraph: claim, then the reason, then the consequence.

  1. That is why cramming until 3 a.m. often backfires: you trade the very hours that would have saved the material.
  2. A good night's sleep improves how well you remember what you studied.
  3. During deep sleep, the brain replays and files the day's new information.

6.The topic is 'video games.' In one sentence, narrow it into a single question an essay could answer.

7.Which sentence is arguable, rather than a plain fact?

8.Which opening sentence promises an essay rather than a report?

9.Which is a claim, not just a topic?

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